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Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest tax-payer’s money in healthcare, other believe that money should be used in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion

Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest tax-payer's money in healthcare, other believe that money should be used in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion

Today, with developed society, people are more and more curious about their own taxes using for what issues. Some people considered that it should be concentrate on using for health services, some others do not. I agree partially with the views and i will give my opinions in this essay
On the one hand, spending taxpayers on health services brings positive effects to comunity. Firstly, it is advantageous for people of all classes in society when using a huge part of taxpayers to invest healthcare will make the cost of treatment, medicine and modern machine bills decrease a lot. This helps residents feel less worried about financial issues, hence, they can go to the hospitals to follow their health number annually. Therefore, it increase the porprotion of survive of victims before quick spread of bacteria diseases. Secondly, it provides health systems have finacial enough to continue develop and expend in the world. When scienists are paid with worth salaries, they can be concentrate on studying and inventing various updated machine to meet the demands of victims about quality and quantity. As a result, the machine, medicine and methods which can treat dangerous disease such as cancer, ADAH,… will appear in the future
On the other hand, using taxpayers for health care has some negative impacts on society. To begin with, the government might miss many chances for other important issues if they were focusing on health systems too much. For example, Children living in emergence houses also need a mount of money to learn at school, eat meals and buy new clothes freely for 18 years when they are not old enough to work part-time or full-time. Therefore, it will be the lost of potiential working sources in the future if the state do not provide enough. In addition, the residents have to face to risks about the price of daily bills, exported food,.. starts inceassing to build tax fund. When mostly taxes are used for developing health services, daily demands are not no longer assisted anymore. This will create a challenge for residents with unchanged salaries and grown bills in daily life
In conclusion, the government should invest the taxes into social issues properly unless it will lack the balance in society


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