Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like.
Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Parents usually give everything for son when they like or ask want to its. In my opinion is have some advantage and drawback for children but in essay, I will ask disadvantage in this.

When children easy gain items or what they like from parent it can easy become children not have dependent in life. Because, Parent always take care of and love children in the higher level, give everything they want then the young people always think parent firstly in all problems, next parents will do it for children. Son only need parents in all problemslead to independent everything they need. Result, it become a habitat very bad for children because the higher level law children.

Additionally, children will be angry in every thing when they not have what they like. Parents take care of children and not train children they should be want and not vital for life make habitat bad, and maybe children have some attitude not friendly with the behavior of parents.

Parent should be train son some rule such as attitude children always good when they not have they want or listen everything parents can down when bad. Make children grow up when they not have parent. Moreover dependents in life. It make children good in life when not have parents. Finally, should limit give everything for children if it not really important for children.


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