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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In these contemporary technological era, the number of professional individuals such as doctors and engineers are increasing. While many people believe that they ought to be work in the country where they did their course, others argue that they freely opt for others country if they wish. In my point of view, professional people should work abroad to gain more experience, then they are free to choose to stay or go back to their home country to work.
On the one hand, several people who have professional jobs choose to work in the country where they finished their course because of several reasons. The first reason for this is that they want to express their patriotism with their home nation where they did the course. A classic demonstration of this is that a doctor finished his health aid course in his hometown, so he absolutely wants to contribute in developing his hometown where he was born. Another reason for this is that they want to live closely to their families and friends. It is obvious that getting use to with totally new environment is really difficult, especially, living far away from their close relative such as their wife and offspring. It is understandable that many individuals do not want to sacrifice their happiness for employment prospect and success.
On the other hand, besides patriots want to contribute in nation development, there are still other people who want to challenge and have a better opportunity in occupation. Firstly, opting for working in another modern and developed countries such as the United States, Canada and so on is a wise choice. An illustrative example for this is that in the United State will provide better facilities, workplace, and income when compared with other developing nations. Not only having a better job quality but it is also a great chance for them to enlarge their experience and knowledge. It is undeniable that working overseas will help professionals interact directly with diverse knowledge of their major.
To sum up, although working abroad gives more employment prospects, choosing to work in the country where they did their classes is also a good decision. Deciding to stay or work overseas is depended on each person demand and goal, so they can freely choose whatever they want.


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