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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Travelling and experiencing new cultures is luxury . There is an ongoing debate on whether visitors should follow and respect the local customs and behavior or whether the host of country should the otherness of the other cultures . From my perspective , I will discuss both views and opinion as to why I agree with both statements .

To begin with , individuals would get cultural loss in the globalized world . Many human beings tend to imitate other customs . This will cause a situation of forgetting their lifestyle in where they were born . Thus , the impact of multicultural easily spread over the youngsters or even the local people . For instance , Mid year festival , Vietnam , faces into oblivion due to the fact that the “unstoppable” popularity of Western culture . Considering the fact that the young generation keeps some foreign festival in their mind such as : Halloween , Christmas , etc . Conversely, they do not know or need not know about the local traditions . As a result, the maintenance of cultural uniqueness is absolutely significant .

On the other hand , embracing the multiculturalism should be crucial for almost states . It takes a large of advantages to economic aspects. The host region should welcome the otherness of other ways of life since attracting many holiday makers from numerous parts of the world , the so called “cultural hotpot” . For example , considering as a place which has various visitors and foreign travel and live , Korea was extremely mono cultural land , it led to a huge charge in Korea that brings a great benefits for financial growth . Therefore , globalization helps to promote countries social science with a high qualities and wealth.

In conclusion , I would argue that artistic diversity is important for every region with making a profit for business. Thus , protecting local developmental should be cared more by education and tourism .


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