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Some people believe that we all have the right to university education and governments should make it free, regardless of financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that we all have the right to university education and governments should make it free, regardless of financial background.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people should be encouraged to go to university and supported tuition fees by governments. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea. I am going to explain my position by presenting, first, earning potential, then, improving people’s intellection.
In terms of earning potential, there is an important point, first, a university education plays a vital role in improving people’s living standards, it makes finding a job easier, and it avoids poverty. For example, a person who has graduated from university with a degree in computer science may have a higher earning potential than someone who pursued vocational training in a specific trade. This is because the specialized knowledge gained from university education often leads to lucrative job opportunities in rapidly evolving industries
In terms of improving people’s intellection. Going to university is the best way to learn more about knowledge and cultures in the world, people can touch the quintessence of humans easily, and attending university offers a unique opportunity to delve deeper into various knowledge domains and cultures worldwide. For instance, students can engage in diverse courses such as anthropology, international relations, or language studies, allowing them to gain a comprehensive understanding of the quintessence of human existence and cultural diversity.
In conclusion, I have shown my position by presenting both earning potential and improving people’s intellection. Therefore, I strongly agree with that idea.


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