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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The innovation of technology in some current years has received some good responses that it can assist the police to find the direction and information about crimes. But it can stir the controversy because of the hidden drawbacks for users. I personally think that there is a beneficial development of technology because of the help to prevent crime.

Initially, there are some advantages from using technology to decrease the rate of crime, especially the fraud such as identify the direction and help police to prosecute the crime. For example, with the development of CCTV and camera surveillance, it can be a mainstream prevention measure in many public places such as railway station, airports, office building, street. Because it can locate the places where criminals pass to intervene immediately and will support the evidences in court of justice in the future. Besides, in some shops and shopping centres, they can use the cameras to check someone who has a suspicious activity. It can identify their faces and prevent their actions immediately. Thanks to the assistance of some kinds of technologies, people can make use of them to reduce the criminal rates.

However, when ordinary people use technology without noticing the risk, it can pose some threats. To be more detailed, if they have little knowledge about the crime of cheat, they can lose an amount of money through some applications in their technological devices. For example, some users tend to hear unusual phone numbers on their mobile phone, so some criminals can make use of this situation to cheat people. Criminals can tempt people to click into the links that they sent to give some presents for someone and steal money from them.

To conclude. I personally believe that if people make use of its in the right way because when technology can be developed in the future, it can bring for people various benefits. It can help to the police to save up their time during criminal pursuit


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