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some people think that

some people think that

It is widely debated whether newspapers or other media are the most effective means for gathering information globally. This essay argues that newspapers, particularly those controlled by governments though online platforms, provide a more convenient means of accessing news.
On the one hand, it is clear that when accessing media, there is a considerable amount of information available on numerous online newspapers. This convenience allows people who wish to read news articles to search for entire articles using several keywords. Consequently, developers have introduced new features to make online newspapers easier to navigate. For instance, audio recordings are designed to assist individuals with limited mobility by reading the entire article out loud, rather than requiring them to do so themselves.

On the other hand, this essay posits that newspapers are frequently censored by certain organizations with significant authority. In particular, information found in traditional newspapers tends to be credible due to the reliability of the governments that regulate these corporations to guarantee the authenticity of their content.Furthermore, news on social media facilitates greater consumer engagement and interaction, enabling easier provision of feedback and comments, as a result enhancing the quality of the news.

In conclusion, in spite of the fact that newspapers are widely preferred platforms to learn news from, I still prefer the use of online sources for news consumption as traditional newspapers are censored by authorities. Thus, the head of each nation should pay more attention on the way collecting information to fit in with the development of the world


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