TASK 1: The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 to 2001

TASK 1: The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 to 2001

The graph depicts the number of prisoners for each sex in a European nation over 9 decades starting in 1911.
In general, the highest number came from males, while it opposite with females captive who tend to decrease in the given years.
Turning to the details, the male detainee population underwent significant fluctuation over 90 years. In the first 10 years, it commenced at approximately 20.000 people and remained relatively stable until 1921. In 1931, the number of prisoners decreased dramatically, after which it tended to rapidly rise to 20.000 following 2 decades and stable at this number to 1971. After that, it was a remarkable rise to 47.000 in 2001
In contrast, the number of female convicts population exhibited a downward trend. At the origination point, it started at over 3.000, followed by a significant plummet to under 1.000 people through 30 years. From 1941 to 1961, the number of climbs an approximately 1.200, after that it evidenced a slight fall to 900 people. Ultimately, the figure rises to about 1800 in 1991 and 1900 in 2001.

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