The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008

The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008

Two charts below illustrate distribution of time labor force spent on activities in a specific nation between 1958 and 2008. The data was recorded based on percentage.
It is notable that the total time spent on working and hanging out with friends and family had the most significant changes. While working adults focused increasingly more on the job, the time they had for their surroundings therefore decreased.
There are two primary trends in the given charts: one is going upwards and another is downwards. To commence with, there are four activities that witnessed the level up in percentage which are: working, traveling to work, other interests, and relaxing at home. The number of time spent on working raised noticeably from 33% to 42%. Working inhabitants experienced the marked growth of four times higher in time transporting to office. Despite the fact that they spent more time away from the 9-to-5 job, they still had their own space by using time on their interests and unwinding at home, which climbed gradually from 6% to 8% and 8% to 13% respectively.
The rest, including going out with friends and family, sleeping, had the opposite tendency from the aforementioned. Above these two, it is alarming that people were less attended to what is needed: time for loved ones. From 1958 to 2008, the portion went down approximately triply, from 19% to only 6%. Moreover, people tended to sleep much less since the percentage fell remarkably from 32% to 25%.

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