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The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
Write at least 150 words.

The given chart shows the proportion of smokers by gender for every 1000 people in Someland between 1960 and 2000.
Overall, it is clear that males distributed to smoking more than females over the period despite gradually decreasing and vice versa.
In 1960, the rate of smoking in men recorded an alarming number of 600 per 1000, while that of women was six times lower than the previous. However, the figure for women smoking kept rising substantially and reached its peak of more than 300 per 1000 people, whereas the opposite thing went for that of men.
After reaching the zenith in 1975, the ratio of female smokers marginally declined along with male smokers, whose rate showed a more downward trajectory, and narrowed their distance. At the end of the period, the proportions of both smokers were close to each other, with around 20% for women and a slightly higher percentage for men, with approximately 25%.


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