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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

The two pictures demonstrates the differences of a harbour over a period of 24 years starting from 2000.

According to informations shown in the maps, there have been some positional changes, additional spots and function added in the Porth Harbour.

From the Main road, they constructed one more small way leading to the car park lying by the south side followed by a new Showers & toilets spot established nearly in the North. In addition, Fishing boats and Marina (private yatchs) had a North-South switch in position. To the North East side of the Fishing boats spot, the second Dock was built to expand the ship-parking area. To the south side, a Cafe & shopping location was establish on the left of the Lifeboat, which has been there for 24 years. Furthermore, in the bottom of the map, the 2000 Public beach's privacy in has been changed due to the fact that the abandoned Castle was replaced by a new Hotel. Following the new construction, a small road leading to the Hotel was established from the big Road before.

To sum up, some changes has been made to increase the usage rate of the Porth Harbour in a 24-year period since 2000.


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