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With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text
messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what
extent do you agree?

In contemporary society, it is undeniable that the proliferation of technology revolutionize the human interaction. Some people prefer online contact, which may reduce the preference of real-life contact. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement and believe communication can foster stronger relationship and the efficient in the workplace.
One the one hand, it is understandable that the citizens are fond of virtual interaction and in turning tradition communication to old fashion ones. In the modern world, the dominant of the internet is ubiquitous in various aspect, including human interaction. Since they offer affordable variations for meetings, emailing, texting, mitigating the need for a physical offices. This is beneficial for business owners as they can save a excessive money thanks to internet, and allocating to others essential aspects, such as marketing, human resources,… Internet also offer their clients a wide range of emotional expressions when texting, this can be seen from the emojis of Facebook introduced in 2016 that gain a gigantic attention throughout the world.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that people never stop valuing the face-to-face interaction due to its importance. Firstly, traditional interaction is often associated with facial expression, helping people fully understand other's opinion from talking and chatting. This is advantageous for the society, resulting from tighten relationship between the citizens and potentially contribute to the lower crime rate. Under the business perspective, it is clear that communication play a crucial role in the success of a company. This is due to the clear instruction from the leaders, employees will enhance their creativity and productivity in their working area, in the meantime, the most commitment will be achieved.
In conclusion, it is true that the technology breakthrough lead to the preferences of using internet to communicate in society. In my opinion, tradition mean of communication still holds a significant role in the society: better creativity and closer relationship in society


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