The bar graph presents data from five Western nations on the proportion of individuals without employment in the 15 to 24 age group and average unemployment in those countries, in 2005. Overall, the percentage of unemployed people aged 15 to 24 was higher than the overall unemployment rate in all countries listed. Specially, Poland ranked the first among while Denmark was the last, in both categories. With regard to the percentage of people aged 15 to 24, the figure in Poland was more than 35%, followed at a quite distance, by Italy at approximately 23%, in 2005. Meanwhile, both Hungary and Germany had the same proportion of unemployed individuals without work, at roughly 15% by 2005. The lowest, at just around 8%, people of 15 to 24 age group, were not employed in Denmark in the period shown. Turning to the overall proportion of unemployment, 15% represented the overall unemployment rate in Poland, compared to precisely 10% in Germany. Meanwhile, the figures for Italy and Hungary, both around 8% in 2007 while that for Denmark was significantly lower, with just approximately 2% for the given period.

The bar graph presents data from five Western nations on the proportion of individuals without employment in the 15 to 24 age group and average unemployment in those countries, in 2005.
Overall, the percentage of unemployed people aged 15 to 24 was higher than the overall unemployment rate in all countries listed. Specially, Poland ranked the first among while Denmark was the last, in both categories.
With regard to the percentage of people aged 15 to 24, the figure in Poland was more than 35%, followed at a quite distance, by Italy at approximately 23%, in 2005. Meanwhile, both Hungary and Germany had the same proportion of unemployed individuals without work, at roughly 15% by 2005. The lowest, at just around 8%, people of 15 to 24 age group, were not employed in Denmark in the period shown.
Turning to the overall proportion of unemployment, 15% represented the overall unemployment rate in Poland, compared to precisely 10% in Germany. Meanwhile, the figures for Italy and Hungary, both around 8% in 2007 while that for Denmark was significantly lower, with just approximately 2% for the given period.

The bar graph presents data from five Western nations on the proportion of individuals without employment in the 15 to 24 age group as well as average unemployment in 2005.
Overall, the percentage of unemployed people aged 15 to 24 was higher than the overall unemployment rate in all countries listed. Specially, Poland ranked the first among while Denmark was the last, in both categories.
With regard to the rate of unemployed people aged 15 to 24, the figure for Poland in 2005 was more than 35%, followed at quite a distance, by Italy at approximately 23%. Meanwhile, both Hungary and Germany had the same proportion of unemployed individuals without employment, at roughly 15% by 2005. The lowest, at just around 8%, was the percentage of people of 15 to 24 age group, were not employed in Denmark in the period shown.
Turning to the overall proportion of unemployment, 15% represented the overall unemployment rate in Poland, compared to precisely 10% in Germany. Meanwhile, the figures for Italy and Hungary, both around 8% in 2007 while that for Denmark was significantly lower, with just approximately 2% for the given period.

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