In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages
In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages
There is a common believe that with the development of technology and science, there is be a prediction that vehicles will operate automatically without appearance of human drivers in next decades. From my perspective, i hold the belief that the benefits of this innovation are weightier than the drawbacks involved.
On the one hand, these non-human vehicles still pose potential risks. The first effect should be mentioned is the safety of passengers will not ensure, there will have several emergency situations that need the management of human. Numerous accidents has caused in auto – driving car because solving department take a long time to handle . In addition, the appearance of automobile is blame to the employment shortage. For instance, due to the fact that everyone inside vehicles will be passengers, almost taxi business will be closed and the proportion of jobless will increase sharply.
On the other hand, there is a host of compelling reasons as to why i am convinced this development is beneficial in loads of aspects. With driver-free vehicles should be applied widely due to the fact that it will reduce and accidents. For example, studies show that growth of accidents which claim thousand live because of the careless drivers, drunk drivers when they are not capable to concentrate the regulations such as speed limit or obstacle ahead. Automatic vehicle will reduce dramatically this problem because the AI is programmed to obey these instructions. Moreover, the application of automated technology in transportation means less expense in traffic facilities. The automatic programming is never break the rules so investing in cameras and notice boards are unnecessary
In conclusion, while it is unquestionable that applying automatic management for transportations still pose a threat on human's live, i contend that innovation will become indispensable in future that could promote living standard.
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"There is a common believe" -> "There is a common belief"
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"there is be a prediction" -> "there is a prediction"
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"will operate automatically without appearance of human drivers in next decades" -> "will operate autonomously without human drivers in the coming decades"
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"From my perspective, i hold the belief" -> "From my perspective, I maintain the belief"
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"On the one hand, these non-human vehicles still pose potential risks" -> "On one hand, these autonomous vehicles still pose potential risks"
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"The first effect should be mentioned is the safety of passengers will not ensure" -> "The first notable effect is the potential compromise of passenger safety"
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"there will have several emergency situations that need the management of human" -> "there may be several emergency situations requiring human intervention"
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"Numerous accidents has caused in auto-driving car because solving department take a long time to handle" -> "Numerous accidents have occurred with autonomous vehicles due to delays in resolution."
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"In addition, the appearance of automobile is blame to the employment shortage." -> "Moreover, the proliferation of autonomous vehicles could exacerbate unemployment."
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"almost taxi business will be closed" -> "the taxi industry will see significant closures"
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"there is a host of compelling reasons" -> "there are a host of compelling reasons"
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"as to why i am convinced this development is beneficial in loads of aspects" -> "why I am convinced this development is beneficial in numerous aspects"
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"With driver-free vehicles should be applied widely" -> "The widespread adoption of driverless vehicles"
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"due to the fact that it will reduce and accidents" -> "due to its potential to reduce accidents"
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"growth of accidents which claim thousand live" -> "increase in accidents resulting in fatalities"
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"drunk drivers when they are not capable to concentrate the regulations" -> "drunk drivers who are unable to adhere to regulations"
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"the automatic programming is never break the rules" -> "automated systems consistently adhere to regulations"
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"so investing in cameras and notice boards are unnecessary" -> "thus, investments in cameras and notice boards are unnecessary"
Explanation: "So investing" lacks clarity; "are unnecessary" should be "is unnecessary." Replacing it with "thus, investments" clarifies the relationship between the preceding and following statements.
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- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provideBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure couldBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysisBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could helpBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantagesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the promptBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt areBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantagesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughlyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. OfferBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specificBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delveBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper intoBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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PresentBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present aBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potentialBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a ClearBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position ThroughoutBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout**Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehiclesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. ConsiderBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploringBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensionsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- DetailedBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanationBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topicBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: TheBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyondBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safetyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’sBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s positionBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employmentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position isBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clearBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
–Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoringBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present aBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a ClearBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefitsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position ThroughoutBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout**Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehiclesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- **Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- DetailedBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanationBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. HoweverBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: TheBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentationBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintainsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacksBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains aBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistencyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stanceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarityBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughoutBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity dueBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due toBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguingBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasionalBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing thatBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shiftsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts inBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefitsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focusBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vagueBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverlessBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague languageBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehiclesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweighBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- **Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- HowBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. HoweverBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How toBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improveBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarityBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: ToBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintainBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expressionBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain aBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression couldBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could beBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improvedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stanceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, asBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as thereBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclearBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulateBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate itsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its positionBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position moreBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammaticalBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoidBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statementsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the authorBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise languageBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’sBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintainingBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intendedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining aBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended messageBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentativeBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
–Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative threadBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- **Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread wouldBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How toBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhanceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improveBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
–Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: EnhBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: EnhanceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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PresentBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarityBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present,Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity byBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, ExtendBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refiningBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend,Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentenceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, andBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structureBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and SupportBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support IdeasBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammarBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas**Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. ClearlyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulateBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the mainBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanationBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argumentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument inBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: TheBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presentsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideasBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce itBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas butBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughoutBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but strugglesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles toBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to developBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. AvoidBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and supportBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support themBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguitiesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectivelyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vaguenBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. ExamplesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vaguenessBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples areBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness thatBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are providedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that mayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detrBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, suchBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detractBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such asBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract fromBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidentsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents causedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused byBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential jobBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job lossBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, ExtendBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend,Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depthBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, andBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and SupportBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherenceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support IdeasBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas**Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. TheBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay alsoBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
–Band Score for Task Response: 6 -
Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also failsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- **Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborateBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- DetailedBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate onBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanationBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation:Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverlessBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: TheBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addressesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issuesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presentsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideasBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
–Band Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas butBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- HowBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficientBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How toBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient developmentBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improveBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: ToBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. WhileBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentationBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While itBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentionsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essayBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potentialBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide moreBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefitsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidenceBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacksBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence toBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks,Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to supportBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, itBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support itsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence orBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claimsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailedBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysisBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples toBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis byBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolsterBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concreteBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its argumentsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examplesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments.Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples andBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. ClaimsBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking themBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficientBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking them directlyBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaborBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking them directly to theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaborationBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking them directly to the argument wouldBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration orBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking them directly to the argument would enhance theBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citationBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address all parts of the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and employment implications, while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and cost savings.
- How to improve: To enhance task response, the essay should provide a more balanced and nuanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Additionally, clearer organization and structure could help ensure all aspects of the prompt are thoroughly addressed.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay’s position is somewhat clear, favoring the benefits of driverless vehicles over the drawbacks. However, the presentation lacks consistency and clarity due to occasional shifts in focus and vague language.
- How to improve: To maintain a clear and consistent stance, the essay should articulate its position more explicitly and avoid contradictory statements. Using precise language and maintaining a consistent argumentative thread would enhance clarity.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but struggles to develop and support them effectively. Examples are provided, such as accidents caused by human error and potential job loss, but they lack depth and coherence. The essay also fails to elaborate on how driverless technology addresses these issues.
- How to improve: To improve idea presentation, the essay should provide more detailed explanations and evidence to support its claims. Strengthening the analysis by offering concrete examples and linking them directly to the argument would enhance the overallBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation ofBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevantBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sourcesBand Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
ivenessBand Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
theBand Score for Task Response: 6
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
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- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
Band Score for Task Response: 6
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
- **Band Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
- HowBand Score for Task Response: 6**
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Answer All Parts of the Question:
- Detailed explanation: The essay attempts to address both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. It acknowledges potential risks such as safety concerns and job displacement while also highlighting benefits like reduced accidents and expenses. However, the discussion lacks depth and specificity, with limited elaboration on the implications of these advantages and disadvantages.
- How to improve: To improve task response, provide a more thorough analysis of the advantages and disadvantages. Offer specific examples and delve deeper into the potential consequences of widespread adoption of driverless vehicles. Consider exploring additional dimensions of the topic beyond safety and employment.
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Present a Clear Position Throughout:
- Detailed explanation: The essay maintains a consistent stance throughout, arguing that the benefits of driverless vehicles outweigh the drawbacks. However, the clarity of expression could be improved, as there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that may slightly obscure the author’s intended message.
- How to improve: Enhance clarity by refining sentence structure and grammar. Clearly articulate the main argument in the introduction and reinforce it throughout the essay. Avoid ambiguities or vagueness that may detract from the persuasiveness of the argument.
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Present, Extend, and Support Ideas:
- Detailed explanation: The essay presents ideas but lacks sufficient development and support. While it mentions potential benefits and drawbacks, it fails to provide substantial evidence or detailed examples to bolster its arguments. Claims are asserted without sufficient elaboration or citation of relevant sources.
- How to Stre the ** essay mostly concrete for the,, or studies illustrate and credibility coherence of the.
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Band điểm Coherence & Cohesion ước lượng: 6
**Band Score for Coherence and Cohesion**: 6
- **Organize Information Logically**:
- **Detailed explanation**: The essay generally organizes information in a logical manner by dividing the discussion into two opposing views: the risks and benefits of driverless vehicles. The introduction sets up the context and the subsequent paragraphs expand on the main ideas. However, there are some inconsistencies in the flow of information within paragraphs, which may lead to confusion for the reader. For example, in the second paragraph, the shift from discussing safety risks to unemployment feels abrupt, without a smooth transition.
- **How to improve**: To enhance logical organization, consider adding transitional phrases to connect ideas within paragraphs and between sections. This would help to create a smoother flow of information and guide the reader through the essay. Also, maintain a clear focus within each paragraph, ensuring that all details contribute to a single central theme.
- **Use Paragraphs**:
- **Detailed explanation**: The essay uses paragraphs to structure the response, with each paragraph containing a distinct theme. However, the structure could be improved by ensuring that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces the main idea, followed by supporting evidence and a concluding sentence that summarizes the point. For instance, in the second paragraph, the discussion on safety risks is interspersed with details on employment impacts, which could be better separated into distinct paragraphs.
- **How to improve**: Consider structuring paragraphs with a clear topic sentence at the beginning, followed by supporting examples, and concluding with a statement that summarizes or transitions to the next point. This would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the paragraphs, ensuring that each one addresses a single idea or theme.
- **Use a Range of Cohesive Devices**:
- **Detailed explanation**: The essay uses some cohesive devices to connect ideas, such as "On the one hand," "On the other hand," and "In conclusion." However, there is a limited variety of cohesive devices, and some transitions are weak or missing, affecting the smoothness of the essay. For example, the transition between the first and second paragraph lacks clear cohesion, making it feel disjointed.
- **How to improve**: To improve the use of cohesive devices, consider incorporating a wider range of linking words and phrases, such as "Moreover," "Furthermore," "For example," or "Consequently." This will help connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively, creating a more cohesive and coherent essay. Additionally, ensure that transitional phrases are used consistently throughout the essay to guide the reader through the arguments in a logical sequence.Band điểm Lexical Resource ước lượng: 6
Band Score for Lexical Resource: 6
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Use a Wide Range of Vocabulary:
- Detailed explanation: The essay demonstrates a moderate range of vocabulary, encompassing terms related to technology, safety, employment, and transportation. However, there are instances where more precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the depth of expression and coherence of ideas. For instance, the phrase "a common believe" could be replaced with "a widely held belief," and "convicted" could be substituted with "convinced." Additionally, the essay lacks diversity in academic or specialized vocabulary, which could enrich the discussion.
- How to improve: To enhance the lexical range, strive to incorporate more diverse vocabulary related to the essay topic. Consider utilizing synonyms and alternative expressions to avoid repetition and increase clarity. Reading academic articles or essays on related subjects can expose you to a wider range of vocabulary, which you can then incorporate into your writing.
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Use Vocabulary Precisely:
- Detailed explanation: The precision of vocabulary usage varies throughout the essay. There are instances where precise terms are employed effectively, such as "driver-free vehicles" and "automated technology." However, imprecise language is also evident, such as "a host of compelling reasons" and "the application of automated technology in transportation means less expense in traffic facilities." These phrases lack specificity and could be improved for clearer communication.
- How to improve: Aim for more precise vocabulary choices by using terms that accurately convey your intended meaning. Avoid vague or overly general language by selecting words that precisely articulate your ideas. Consult a thesaurus or academic resources to identify precise vocabulary relevant to the topic.
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Use Correct Spelling:
- Detailed explanation: Spelling accuracy in the essay is generally satisfactory, with only a few noticeable errors, such as "believe" instead of "belief," "convicted" instead of "convinced," and "live" instead of "lives." While these errors do not significantly impede comprehension, improving spelling accuracy can enhance the overall professionalism and clarity of the writing.
- How to improve: To enhance spelling accuracy, consider utilizing spell-checking tools available in word processors or online platforms. Additionally, proofreading your work carefully before submission can help identify and correct spelling errors. Developing a habit of reviewing and editing your writing for spelling mistakes will contribute to improved accuracy over time.
Overall, while the essay demonstrates competence in vocabulary usage and spelling, there is room for improvement in both range and precision. Incorporating a broader array of vocabulary and refining the precision of word choices can elevate the sophistication and coherence of the writing, ultimately enhancing its effectiveness in conveying ideas to the reader.
Band điểm Grammatical Range & Accuracy ước lượng: 6
Band Score for Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 6
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Use a Wide Range of Structures:
- Detailed explanation: The essay demonstrates a basic range of sentence structures, including simple, compound, and complex sentences. However, there is a noticeable lack of variety and sophistication in sentence structures. For example, the essay predominantly consists of simple sentences and lacks complexity in its sentence structures, leading to a monotonous rhythm and repetitive style.
- How to improve: To enhance the variety and effectiveness of sentence structures, consider incorporating a greater variety of sentence types, such as compound-complex sentences, which can add depth and sophistication to your writing. Additionally, varying sentence beginnings and lengths can create a more engaging and dynamic flow. Aim to balance short, punchy sentences with longer, more intricate ones to maintain reader interest and convey ideas more effectively.
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Use Grammar and Punctuation Accurately:
- Detailed explanation: The essay exhibits several grammatical errors and punctuation inaccuracies throughout. These errors include issues with subject-verb agreement ("there is be"), article usage ("a common believe"), tense consistency ("there is be a prediction"), punctuation errors (missing commas, incorrect use of capitalization), and word choice ("a host of compelling reasons as to why i am convinced").
- How to improve: First, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and proper article usage. Reviewing these fundamentals can significantly improve the clarity and accuracy of your writing. Additionally, pay close attention to punctuation rules, including proper comma usage to separate clauses and phrases effectively. Lastly, aim to expand your vocabulary and choose words carefully to convey your ideas accurately and precisely. Proofreading your work carefully can help identify and correct these errors before submission, enhancing the overall coherence and professionalism of your writing.
Bài sửa mẫu
There is a common belief that with the development of technology and science, vehicles will operate automatically without the need for human drivers in the next few decades. From my perspective, I hold the belief that the benefits of this innovation outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, these non-human vehicles still pose potential risks. The first effect that should be mentioned is that the safety of passengers will not be ensured. There will be several emergency situations that require the management of a human. Numerous accidents have been caused in auto-driving cars because the solving department takes a long time to handle them. In addition, the advent of automobiles is blamed for employment shortages. For instance, since everyone inside vehicles will be passengers, almost all taxi businesses will close, and the proportion of joblessness will increase sharply.
On the other hand, there is a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced this development is beneficial in many aspects. Driver-free vehicles should be applied widely because they will reduce accidents. For example, studies show that the growth of accidents, which claim thousands of lives, is due to careless drivers, drunk drivers, or those who are not able to concentrate on regulations such as speed limits or obstacles ahead. Automatic vehicles will dramatically reduce this problem because the AI is programmed to obey these instructions. Moreover, the application of automated technology in transportation means less expense on traffic facilities. The automatic programming never breaks the rules, so investing in cameras and notice boards becomes unnecessary.
In conclusion, while it is unquestionable that applying automatic management for transportation still poses a threat to human lives, I contend that this innovation will become indispensable in the future and could promote a higher standard of living.
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