describe your country where you live

describe your country where you live

I am a person who was born in Vietnam, which is one of the most spectacular countries in the world with lots of stunning scenes. It has a number of things, which can make you stunned and in my point of view, Vietnam is the astonishing place to reside or visit. Why is Vietnam one of the best countries to reside or visit?

Firstly, Vietnam has a number of majestic views that you are able to take photos and it also has a variety of towering buildings, skyscrapers, which can make you overwhelmed. In addition, the number of tourists travelling to Vietnam has increased dramatically for recent years, it illustrated how attractive Vietnam is. Due to the fact that in Vietnam, there are plenty of amusement parks, lavish hotels and especially the fresh air. Moreover, Vietnamese people are so benevolent that they always help you when you are in trouble, they also teach you the culture of Vietnam when you would like to know. Furthermore, Vietnamese food is so appetizing that you can be enchanted by it, although food may be made in a frugal place, not in lavish place, it is also delectable like in posh restaurants, food in this charming country is not complicated to make or not required lots of ingredients, but it not only brings to customers its appetite, but also brings to them chef 's determination who wants to make food tasty for customers ' appetite and their praise for chef. As well as that, Vietnam is one of the most historic country, the history of Vietnam has lasted for over 4000 years, hence, you are able to visit numerous historic places and monuments of historic heroes when going sightseeing. Additionally, Vietnam is also a home of lots of endangered species, these species are residing in a number of national parks where they can have a better life than in the jungle, if you are interested in, you should go to national parks in Vietnam once of the lifetime.

Overall, Vietnam is one of the best countries in the world, it is also a historic country. This country is a developing country and it can develop more in the future. If you have an opportunity, I think you should travel to Vietnam.


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