The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. The line graph illustrates the intended years immigrants would stay in the UK over the course of 8 years, commencing in 2000. Meanwhile, the pie chart depicts some of the reasons why so many immigrants chose to stay in the UK. Overall, there was an upward trend recorded in the figure for 2 to 4 years and that of up to 2 years. In contrast, the data on 4 and more years showed a steady throughout the entire period. Notably, up to 2 years was the intended length of stay holding the highest position among the list years while 2 to 4 years ranked lowest. According to the pie chart, work was the top reasons resulting in people chose to immigrate to the UK. Turning to the line graph, the figure for 2 to 4 years experienced a slight fluctuation, starting at over 50 thousands and rising to around 100 thousands. Whereas, the reverse pattern could be observed in the data on 4 or more years as it remained stable, at roughly 150 thousands. In addition, there was a substantial growth witnessed from the figure for up to two years, with 150 thousands at the initial point then increasing to around 250 thousands by the end of the period. In terms of specific figures from the pie chart, the data on work accounted for the highest portion, at 38%, which was a little higher than that of study, at 32%. Far fewer were those of accompany, other and no reason stated, with 16%, 7% and 7%, respectively.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. The line graph illustrates the intended years immigrants would stay in the UK over the course of 8 years, commencing in 2000. Meanwhile, the pie chart depicts some of the reasons why so many immigrants chose to stay in the UK.
Overall, there was an upward trend recorded in the figure for 2 to 4 years and that of up to 2 years. In contrast, the data on 4 and more years showed a steady throughout the entire period. Notably, up to 2 years was the intended length of stay holding the highest position among the list years while 2 to 4 years ranked lowest. According to the pie chart, work was the top reasons resulting in people chose to immigrate to the UK.
Turning to the line graph, the figure for 2 to 4 years experienced a slight fluctuation, starting at over 50 thousands and rising to around 100 thousands. Whereas, the reverse pattern could be observed in the data on 4 or more years as it remained stable, at roughly 150 thousands. In addition, there was a substantial growth witnessed from the figure for up to two years, with 150 thousands at the initial point then increasing to around 250 thousands by the end of the period.
In terms of specific figures from the pie chart, the data on work accounted for the highest portion, at 38%, which was a little higher than that of study, at 32%. Far fewer were those of accompany, other and no reason stated, with 16%, 7% and 7%, respectively.

The line graph illustrates the intended years immigrants would stay in the UK over the course of 8 years, commencing in 2000. Meanwhile, the pie chart depicts some of the reasons why so many immigrants chose to stay in the UK.
Overall, there was an upward trend recorded in the figure for 2 to 4 years and that of up to 2 years. In contrast, the data on 4 and more years showed a steady throughout the entire period. Notably, up to 2 years was the intended length of stay holding the highest position among the list years while 2 to 4 years ranked lowest. According to the pie chart, work was the top reasons resulting in people chose to immigrate to the UK.
Turning to the line graph, the figure for 2 to 4 years experienced a slight fluctuation, starting at over 50 thousands and rising to around 100 thousands. Whereas, the reverse pattern could be observed in the data on 4 or more years as it remained stable, at roughly 150 thousands. In addition, there was a substantial growth witnessed from the figure for up to two years, with 150 thousands at the initial point then increasing to around 250 thousands by the end of the period.
In terms of specific figures from the pie chart, the data on work accounted for the highest portion, at 38%, which was a little higher than that of study, at 32%. Far fewer were those of accompany, other and no reason stated, with 16%, 7% and 7%, respectively.


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