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An opinion essay about limiting teenager screen time( shouldn’t)

An opinion essay about limiting teenager screen time( shouldn't)

Digital technologie is very developing now, so students also have for them a smartphone. That caused parents limit screen time of students. I think that parents should not strictly limit their children's screen time for some reasons.
First of all , teenagers who need spend a lot of time on screen to study and search for internet about their homework. If parents limit us screen time , we will not have more time to research new things and grow up ourselves.
In addition, teenagers spend screen time also can develop their mind. Helping they can understand more about the world around. Besides, we can relax and happy after spend time went to school.
Moreover, spending enough time on screen is good for teenagers health. Looking at a screen smartphone or computer for a short time cần help improve our lifestyle. If we use enough time for screen also help us to receive good achievements in our studies.
In conclusion , screen will not bad if we not use too much . I think that parents should not control the time their children.


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