Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Some individuals believe that modern people are becoming apathetic towards preserving traditions of region , while others people believe it is necessary . According my perpestive , a cultural differentation is an intergral part of the world , therefore people should keep and cherish everythings they got from the ancestor .
There are various reasons why individuals should preserve native culture and its traditions . Thank to globalization , there are many exotic culture invading which is a main reason why people tend to disregard and forget their national identity . Firstly , a customs was formed in the national metality is a result of centuries – old history(1) . Due to live in peace , within development of technology , in term of social media , individuals get acquainted with tendency of eye-catching modern culture which seems as a goal and a target they want to achive which is a serious impact on people's awareness that may lead them forgot a history of previous generations(2) . For example , it is sadly said that in this age , almost young people have no chanes to contacting or joining in folk games which are celebrated in some traditional festivals (3) .Furthemore , they spend too much their time serving their entertainment purposes on virtual platforms instead of discovering and learning about their National culture lagacy (4) . As a result , when they are asked about them , they have a feedback of non-knowledgably for what the most importance of their possessions (5) .
On the contracdiction , many people believe that it is crucial for maitaining and preserving culture identity which is a foundation of the soul of each person (1) . It is true that assessment of a loss of color in a brilliance culture is a loss of the past , history or even national resources which will be dissolved in different culture in the present expansive condition interface (2) . To begin with , it is crucial for enhance people's awareness of where they live which can help them known how country was formed , specially the hardships of previous generation (3). Consequently , they gradually become more apprenciative and preserve what their recieve (4).
In conclusion , protecting traditional culture does not mean not taking part in cutural integration but rather selectively absoring it .
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