The diagram below shows the process of making carbonated drinks, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons in when we relevant

The diagram below shows the process of making carbonated drinks, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons in when we relevant

The picture describe how to make soft drinks
Overall,the process comprise 5 main stages, beginning with water refreshing and ending with the final products beong packed and brought to the supermarkets for sale.
at the beginning of the process,raw water is cleaned throug a filter, after which this liquid continues to be controlled by water softener and mixed with some chemicals.Subsequently,the cleaned water comes to step 2 for heating evaporation and carbonation .The water is pumped to electric heater but passed through the cooling pipe immediately for the heat shock that creates carbon dioxide.After that,the first step water becomes carbonated water,it is passed to the next stage for mixing .The liquid in mixing tank is combined with many ingredients such as: food coloring,syrup for sweetness and flavour for a pleasent scent.
The process continues with the soft drink being cleaned for the last time.

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