The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams indicate the evolution of a horse over survey period.Overview ,there are some dramatic transportation especially in the foot skeletal structure.
In terms of the foot bone changes, the number of hooves reduces from 6 to only one and the size of hooves are also bigger when it is combined with smaller hooves. This thing helps the legs and hooves of a horse become stronger and help them balance their body.
Regarding other body parts, Firstly there is a change significant about Skeleton of horse when skeleton structure become more huger and higher over survey every period as a result it can help the movement of a horse so easily .Furthermore nowadays ,a horse built-up muscle such as leg muscle mass and thigh.Secondly neck of horse is also been bigger over 40 million years so it can help horse intake foods more convenient.Thirdly ,about head part of horse they are longer and some other things seem bigger such as their nose

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