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The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

The line graph displays the percentage of tourists visiting four distinct attractions in Brighton, England—namely, the Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier, and Festival—from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, the proportion of visitors to the Pavilion and Pier experienced a generally upward trend, while the Art Gallery and Festival saw declines. Notably, the Pavilion attracted the highest proportion of visitors at its peak within this period.

In 1980, the Festival led with 30% of tourists, slightly surpassing both the Pavilion and Art Gallery, which each drew a little over 20%. In contrast, the Pier accounted for the smallest share, at just 10%. Despite some minor fluctuations, the Pier’s proportion remained around 10% until 1995. Meanwhile, the Pavilion showed a marked increase, reaching nearly 50% by 1995, effectively doubling the proportions of the Festival and Art Gallery, which hovered around 25%.

Between 1995 and 2010, the Pavilion’s share notably declined, falling to around 35% before reaching approximately 30% by the end of the period. The Art Gallery exhibited a similar downward trend, plummeting to under 10% in 2010, marking it as the lowest among the attractions. The Festival’s visitor share remained stable at around 28% throughout these years. In contrast, the Pier saw a steady increase, ultimately peaking at just above 20% in 2010, securing its position as the third most-visited site by the period’s close.


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