The pie chart show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie chart show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The two first given piechart provide a breakdown of information of university students’ level of happiness about IT support by selecting full-time and part-time counterparts. Meanwhile, by means of using the same surveyed participants, the other pie chart depict the contentment rate of the aforementioned students about the current opening hours.

Notably, 54% of full-time university students feeling very happy about the IT support, occupies the leading position, which dramatically higher than that of part-time group ( 54% against to 20%). Futhermore, the percentage of students in full-time group not having the contentment about the mentioned service takes up by far the fewest proportion with the figures capturing 15%. In the contrary, its percentage in part-time group ranks the first place, accouting for 45% of the entire piecharts.

Regarding the others piecharts, both full-time and part-time students having the highest happiness ratio about the current opening hours, dominates the figures, which constitute 87% and 72%, respectively. In addition, it sees an insignificant proportion of those who feels not at all about the work’s starting time, representing 1% in full-time group and 5% in part-time group.

In conclusion, most students in both groups are extremely satisfied about the services at work. Eventually, a vast range of university students amusing about IT support is higher than the another of opening hours.


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