The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These two tables provide information on what people in the UK think about the areas that need increased
government investment.
Looking on the first table, there’re two main groups: men and women. At first glance, men mainly wanted the
government to pay more attention to education with a share of over a half of all UK males. Whereas, around one-third thought that health should be cared more. While other areas seemed to be unnocticed with only 13% males thinking about it. At the same time, nearly 50% of females’s thoughts are that health must be increased spending on. Besides, 40% want education to be increased funding and only 12% being interested in growth of spending on other areas.
In term of ages, around 50% UK adults aged 35-64 wish that health should be increased sinking money to.Whereas, over 70% of the elderly aged more than 65% bieleved that health must be mostly cared by the government. On the contrary, younger groups aged 18-34’s thought that it is necessary to increase providing capital for education, with a share of 40% for 18-24 years old group and over one-third belong to 25-34 groups.
Overall, it can be seen that men mainly think that education should receive more investment from the government, while women’s want is to plow more money into health, Regarding ages, 35-65+ aged groups assumed that health must witnessed a growth of government’s invesment. During the time, younger people in 18-34 years old think that it is needful to be more focused on improving education.


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