Tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world. Million people today are travelling farther and farther throughout the year. Some people argue that the development of tourism has had negative effects on local communities, other think that its influences are positive. Write an essay to discuss the effects of tourism on local communities. Including reasons and relevent examples to support your answer.

Tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world. Million people today are travelling farther and farther throughout the year. Some people argue that the development of tourism has had negative effects on local communities, other think that its influences are positive.
Write an essay to discuss the effects of tourism on local communities. Including reasons and relevent examples to support your answer.

Nowadays travelling is one of the favorite activities of people in all around the world. Moreover, people tend to travel farther and farther throughout the year. There is an arguement about its trend may cause negative or positive and can encourage the growing of industries in the world
On the one hand, we can easily see that when mor e and more people visit any place, government will ay more attention and so that they spend more money and resources to promote and improve facility to increase the quality for that place. In addition, when the number of tourism is develop, they provide local people opportunity to boost the local economy. The local communities can gain profits from supplying goods and services to visitors. The more tourist come, the more entertainment services are opened to meet their needs.
On the other hand, the development of tourism may cause environmental damage like pollution, hurting widlife habitats and so on. For example, mountains and forests may be devastated for building the resorts construction and it may causes ecological imbalance.
In conclusion, for all the points I mentioned, the advantages outweight the disadvantanges. However, we still need a solution to limit the ricks may be happends to limit the bad effects with local communities

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