Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this?

Many parents today do not spend much time with their children.
Why is this?

The lack of time spent on children by parents is primarily caused by hectic schedules. These days, both parents and children are overloaded with their daily tasks. Due to the high cost of living in modern society, parents have a tendency to do other side jobs in addition to their nine to five jobs so that they can earn sufficient money for pay for daily expenses. When they end the day at nine or ten o’clock, it is the time that children are completing homework and assignments for the next school day. As a result, parents and children seem not to be able to spend quality time together.

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