Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents
believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their
children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether the childcare responsibilities of busy parents should be rest with family members or whether it would be better when given giving to childcare centres. While I understand the logic behind the former view, I am still in favor of the latter.

Those who believe that grandparents should care for their grandchilds grandchildren may have several arguments. However, the most notable of which is that they can give greater caring, it is obvious that grandparents are mostly those who retired so that they can have a ton of free time merely for paying attention to the development stages of their grandchildren grandchilds and fufilling their demands. This is not only because of the inevitable responsibilities but also coming the special bond as well. However, I think leaving children for grandparents it is only of short-term relevance while in the long run, this can make children becoming become over-indulgent in excessive love from grandparents and can not ensure a well-rounded development for them.

Despite the afor[e]mentioned arguments, I still hold the belief that childcare centres are probably better in terms of providing the best care for several reasons. Chief among these is that they can equip children with essentials life skills. Devided Dividing chidren into many groups of children in accordance with their ages, centres can reinforce an individual’s innate talent and instincts instinction through a wide range of creative activit[i]es. For example, doing handicrafts handmade stuffs and teaching table manners are the two common activities in a childcare centres and are favorable due to the practical applications behind them. The second reason is that this can be suitable for everyone, especially young parents who may not have hands-on experience and quality time when it comes to child[-]rearing. In order to give an exact teaching method to each child, they should send their children to centres instead of spending a great amount of time doing some difficult reseaches on children’s characteristics and behaviours by themselves.

In conclusion, it is understandable why some may argue that children of working parents could receive better care from family members taking care of children should be a family members’ duty. However, I would take the view that childcare centres would do a better job.


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