Opinion some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main sbjects. other believe it is more important to give all their time and attendtion to studying for qualifications. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Opinion
some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main sbjects. other believe it is more important to give all their time and attendtion to studying for qualifications. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent days, the main subjects are not the only choices for students who disire to learn extra things. But some people indicate students should pay attention to studying thier qualification all time. I partially agree with this points
There many reasons to support to people who really want to get knowledge from other subjects. They would learn more new things around their majors to expand experiences because if they learn something that they have not seen before, they will enrich life experiences and be a professional person. Besides, when they apply for companies, the boss will check their major and something such as talent, lifes’experiences or the social skills that they have been learn during they have had courses of major parts of them. Thus if they have done that more, the rate to be accept will be higher and easy to be a part of companies
On the other hand, it is substantive to focus on spending all time without studying anything because of power of brainstorm. From that, student do not be disrupted by having to learn another subject. In addition to increasing professionalization of them and many other jobs in the future. However, if they just had done only one thing, they could been passive in society. Because people who have more experiences in addition to their major would have opportunities to pass entrances of many business. Perhaps landing a high paid job with their qualification without nothing
In conclusion, getting extra knowlegde and learning a only thing for our qualification can be combined. That allow people will be highly experienced and profesional in future jobs

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