Some people think that the increasingly use of computers and mobile phone in communication has negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that the increasingly use of computers and mobile phone in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some individual think that the growing use of computers and smart phone in communication has negative effect on young generation's reading and writing skills. this writer strongly agree with viewpoint due to the change of words in social media is invention. However, it also make losing the original of words and meaning.
The increasingly use of computers and mobile phone in communication make people feel unconfident and can not speak fluently in real life. Young people using computer or smart phone to communicate they will not understand how to speak more feeling when they talk with someone in real life. As a result, they will become unconfident to speak with someone and it will look like a robot is saying somethings no feeling, no emotion, so it make young generation's communication skills decreased.
On the other hand, the heavy dependence on use computers and mobile phones to communicate that will make losing the words in original meaning.

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