The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building.

The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building.

The given diagrams reveal changes of an accommodation building for students from 2010 until now.

By comparing the two maps, there are considerable developments in the student’s housing during the period. In general, the whole building is widened with more facilities for the students.

The garden areas in the north of the building were restricted and replaced with more student bedrooms. In 2010, the kitchen was placed alone under the bedrooms; however, it is now combined with the social area in one site. The student bedroom and bathroom remains the same location from 2010 until now, which is next to the hallway. In the past, there was only a bedroom area in the southwest corner of the map. Meanwhile, an en-suite room is currently located next to the bedroom, facing the main entrance and at the end of the hallway. Also, the rest garden area in the south of the building was transferred into a parking lot during the period.

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