The graphs below show the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema visits by different age groups from 1996 to 2000.

The graphs below show the cinema attendance in Australia and the average cinema visits by different age groups from 1996 to 2000.

The diagrams illustrate the presence of residents at the cinema and the medium visits to this facility varied from age range from 1996 to 2000 in Australia.
Overall, the percentage of residents being at the cinema reached a plateau in 1997 and the frequency fluctuated a modest quantity. Furthermore, the line of 14-24 group and 25-35 group are nearly identical.
Looking at the first chart, it is evident that the proportion of population commenced at 62% in 1996 then grew to 72% in 1997. To the end of the period, this ratio levelled off despite a 2% drop in 1999. The medium visits possessed a 0.8 growth between 1996 (10.3) and 1997 (11.1). After that, it decreased to 8.3 visits in 1998 and remained the same after 3 years.
The second chart demonstrates the same pattern in all age groups, the number of visits increased from 1996 to 1097 then declined in 1998. Afterward, it rose back in 1999 and exhibited a reduction in 2000. The group of 14-24 and 24-35 owned the greatest visits. During the span of time, these two both featured some fluctuation and increased from 15 visits (1996) to almost 19 visits (2000). The others exhibited a 4 visits increase; in addition, 50+ people didn’t go to the cinema as much as other age groups with just approximately 15 visits in 2000.

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