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The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged between 18 and 34.

The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged between 18 and 34.

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The table indicates the variation of the quantity of American athletics in different kind of sports during the time from 2010 to 2014.

 Overall, over this period of 4 years, there was a moderate increase in the total number of participants in two main groups of sports, the equipment required activities including baseball, basketball, softball and weightlifting and the unrequired one consisting of hiking, running, swimming and yoga. All of them witnessed change from the least to the most.

 After the first glance to the table, regarding the sports which demand equipments, the value of baseball players decreased significantly by 1.6 milions people while the basketball particpants also witnessed the same downward movement from 9 milions to 7.7 milion players at that time. As the same as the above sports, there was a noticeable fall in the data of softball people whereas the plummet of weightligting data wasn't too crucial, only 0.2 million athletics left this particular sport.

 On the otherhand, in term of the other group, beside swimming with an outstanding plunge of approximately 3.5 millions swimmer, the other three had positive rises. In fact, there was a dominant rocket of 2 millions people in hiking and runners value witnessed a significant addition of 3 milions people in these 4 years. Additionally, yoga participants also occured a remarkable increase from 9 milions to over 12 milions athletics over the period.


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