University students should pay the full cost of their studies because a university education benefits individuals rather than society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

University students should pay the full cost of their studies because a university education benefits individuals rather than society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people claim that university students should be responsible for the payment of their entire tuition. While advocates of this idea contend that students reap more significant benefits than society, I strongly believe that it benefits both individuals and the community. Hence, universities should keep awarding scholarships and giving financial support to their students.

Granted, university education benefits both the community and people individually. Medical universities, for instance, could award scholarships to deserving candidates who face financial problems, allowing low-income brackets to get access to higher education. After graduating, a person who got financial support can be a highly qualified medical professional, saving many lives. This is also the case with other occupations such as police, electrician or machinery operator. By establishing educational sponsorships for deserving and intellectual individuals, there will be more and more competent employees, contributing to the prosperity of the society. In terms of individuals, it is indisputable that some low-income students could work part-time after school and on weekends to pay for their tuition. As a result of these financial pressures, students tend to devote less time and effort to their lessons, leading to poor academic performances. It is thus essential for government and universities to grant scholarships, this can help students have more time to spend on their lessons, effectively exploiting their potential. Overall, both society and university students can derive significant benefits from university education.

In addition, education should not turn into business. If it is mandatory for students to pay their educational costs, many intellectual individuals from financially disadvantaged backgrounds who could be trained to be professional employees will refuse the opportunities attending higher education. Thus, they cannot apply to jobs where graduation is the minimum criteria. Many Central Government Jobs, for instance, require a bachelor degree to apply for any positions. Consequently, the number of employed people will decrease, imposing a burden on society. Government has to allocate a substantial sum of money for unemployment benefits, which can be used for more justified purposes such as establishing voluntary educational programs or refurbishing public buildings like parks or gardens.

In conclusion, not only do individuals obtain benefits from university, but also the community does. It is thus essential to create more sponsorships to potential students with financial hardships who can be trained to be professional employees, contributing to the prosperity of society.

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