Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about the way to improve the environment in your neighborhood

Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about the way to improve the environment in your neighborhood

We have way to improve the environment. Firstly, if you don't use your appliances, you can turn off those devices can help save energy. Second, we do not litter in neighborhood and streets in there because if we do it, my neighborhood will be dirtied and polluted. Third, they suggest sorting the litter bring many benefits for environment and people in neighborhood life such as raises awarness, handle waste easier. Then, people in neighborhood planting more trees to make atmosphere can fresher and clearer. There are improves the environment of my neighborhood can use help to bring environment green- clean -beautiful

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