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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Global warming is one of the biggest threats to the environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Global warming is one of the biggest threats to the environment.

What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.

In the modern era, the environment is severe threated by climate change. This is mainly because of emission and deforestation which are caused by human, and this problem could be effectively solved by governmental, organizational and individual engagement.

It is obvious that there are a number of reasons for global warming. The first reason is that people emit toxic gas into the environment. For example, in technology 4.0 era, people use more vehicles that emit a lot of toxic smoke and gas at the atmosphere, leading to air pollution. As a result, causing climate change phenomenon. Another reason is forest clearance. In other words, people cut down trees and burn forest to serve manufacturing needs from real wood. This problem not only results in global warming but also the loss of wildlife species.

There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, it is necessary for the government to enact laws to prevent people from cutting trees. Besides, the government should also raise public awareness by launching campaign about environmental protection. Secondly, manufacturers and organizations should use environmentally-friendly energy resources and technologies to reducing global warming. For instance, companies can use solar power to create electricity instead of coal, helping enhance air quality and limit the climate change. Last but not least, this issue could be solved if individuals lead a green lifestyle. To be more specific, individuals can use public transit instead of using private vehicle and plant more trees. This contributes to restore deforested forest and protect the environment.

In conclusion, this essay believes that global warming is primarily caused by deforestation and emission. Therefore, governments, organizations, and individuals should take effective steps to improve this modern-day issue.


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