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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a common belief that countries with longer workweeks have stronger economies than those with shorter workweeks. This article disputes that claim since excessive work hours have a negative impact on a nation's economy and are uncommon in western nations.
The main reason why extended work hours don't improve a country's economy is because the West doesn't adopt this practice. This is due to the fact that nations in North America and Europe prioritize work-life balance, which is why they have eight hours of work each day and weekend vacation. As a result, they become more productive, which eventually strengthens the nation's economy. For example, the majority of occupations in the USA are 8 hours long, and people are often free on weekends. This is a major factor in their growing economy.
An other rationale is that an extended work schedule is bad for a country's economy. This is due to the fact that people become bored with their occupations when they spend more than twelve hours a day at work performing the same boring tasks. They thus do not exert themselves, which is detrimental to their country's economic situation. For instance, individuals in India work long hours 12 hours a day at their occupations. As a result, the employees don't give their jobs their all.
In conclusion, as many western nations have moderate work schedules and since spending a lot of time at work is bad for a country's economy, extended work hours are not as helpful as short ones for a country's economic performance


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