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You should spend about 60 minutes to write at least 250 words on the following topic. The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the internet? What solutions do you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should spend about 60 minutes to write at least 250 words on the following topic.

The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems.

What do you think are the main problems associated with the internet? What solutions do you suggest?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some consider that the internet has become increasingly popular in recent times and also caused a range of handicaps. I clearly have an idea that many primary obstacles are related to the effect of The internet. Thus, I will give both reasons and solutions for this.
Firstly, A big issue is that there is human addiction to social media. It is easy to see so many kinds of smartphones on people’s hand. They use them everywhere every day. They take all time on it and distract from their main work per day. For instance, many online networks such as Facebook, TikTok or X are truly attractive to people in order to surf, watch and waste time. Moreover, the second reason is risk of personal information stolen. The dangerous hackers may make use of the hole of data security with a view to entice money and sell users’s information for evil purposes. Specifically, when we access to an unidentified and strange link, we might be lost the control right of our devices.
So I will bring some advices to tackle these problems. The Internet must be a necessary tool instead of a device that we depend on. We have to arrange more time for outdoor and other healthy activities. Then, reducing the time for electronic types of equipment and really concentrating on main work like learning, doing the housework or playing sports. Additionally, we can prevent ourselves from being stolen individual data by setting up a difficult password and filtering accurate news to track. By this way, we would be self- protection and take advantage of the Internet effectively.
In sum, nowadays the internet is used widely and brings a lot of hidden risks that we can not predict like the dependence of people and managing personal information. Although it still has disadvantages, if we use it carefully and follow my suggestions it will overshadow the detrimental effects.


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