friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. to what excent do you agree or disagree ?

friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. to what excent do you agree or disagree ?

in the contempory era, digital assistance has triggered the existence of online friends, leading to assumption of inferiority in importance of virtually-made friendships to physical ones. this essay, despite arguing for those advocating for the importance of friendship- based digital platform, still ackownledges the superior significance of traditonal platform.

those advocating for how meaningful virtual friendsips is assume that digitally- made friendships have provided media users a wide range of knowledge. this is because individual may be friends with a lot of people with diversed interests, providing them more and more chances to acquire insight. that is the advantage which could not be offered much by the limitation of particular person's real friend circle . for example, facebook users could be connected to groups of individuals sharing the same interest of cars. by this way, cars users could have more sourses of information relating to how to have their car fixed, or used appropriately. therefore, virtually- created friendships are meaningful in terms of catering individuals more insight from each other.

the distractors of this stance posit that in-person friendship could be more favorable because of trust and immediate supports. regarding the former, it is readily apprearant that traditional friendships could sprout trust. this is because it allows the presence of in-person conversations, contributing to a mutual understading among individuals,. the more mutual understading is develoeped, the deeper connection of each other would become, fostering the trust of friendships which could not be likely to be found online. coupled with this is a matter of support of a friend. it is acknowledged that both online and real friends also come in forms of assistance, but only the latter could pave the way for the immediate support. this is because truly-made friendships are usually made via trust which could not be found easily by means of media. therefore, true friendships are sprouted from reality , giving rise to the instance of mutal support.

in conclusion, despite the expansion of knowledge offered by online friends, the heavier emphasis should be put on the importance of in-person relationship as trust and true support could be worth putting in consideration

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