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Some people believe that technology is making people less sociable, while others argue that it is improving communication. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that technology is making people less sociable, while others argue that it is improving communication. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that the people become less sociable when use technology, beside that some other think that it is opportunity to improving communication. In my point of view agree with both 2 options.

The first view is that technology can make people less sociable. The main to reason lead to this issue that is less contact around people and do not have many opportunity played outside activities. When the people use technology too much, they will less talk and contact with their family and friends instead of text with online friends. Beside they use phone every hour, every day and do not take their eyes off screen phone. Therefore,they become lazy to participate outside activities. These things make the people less opportunities to communicate with social.

As example, i had a friend, at that time she had the phone, she had become less talk to me instead she always use phone to chat with online friends. She even has not joined conversation of family, she surf the phone every hour.

On the other hand, the technology help to people can improve communication. Because they make friends with many people in the world and talk to them very much. When use internet they can search many foreign people to play or talk throughout apps. From that they can practice their communicate skills. It bring many benefit to people.

The using technology has many both benefits and disadvantages. However you just use it suitably  like use less it and spend time to sociable activities.

In conclusion, there are both advantage and disadvantage when people use technology. To more socially, you can join many outside sports and practice communicate with many friends in internet.


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